Friday 6 April 2018

Liam And The Great Big Orange Thing

I am learning to write about what happens before during and after an event

Liam is a normal kid, he has dark hair and light blue eyes that glistens every time he goes out in the sun. Like everybody else he wakes up and gets ready to go to school. He has breakfast every morning. but one day as he leaves his house to go to school, he finds himself face to face with a giant orange robot with weird tentacle like things sticking out of its side.

He dived under it. But it squeezes him with it’s huge thick mechanical legs. Then it grabs him with one of it’s weird tentacle like things and sits him on his back. Suddenly all the metal in the area starts to move toward us. In response the robot starts to run, all the metal behind us is picking up speed, the robot runs faster and faster.The next thing he know I’m speeding down the road at 100mph. It feels like I’m in a convertible with no windscreen on the motorway. The people on the sidewalk are gaping at us. I then feel something gurgling in my stomach. . .then suddenly vomit comes hurling out of my mouth and splatters all over the back of this beast like robot. It stops and falls down to the ground all the magnetic things that had been chasing us thudder to a stop.

Liam's lying on back,he’s in his bed under his blankets and covered in vomit, Liam was relieved it was a dream after all.

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